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:iconbrokencassette:
Thanks for the favs~ ^^
:iconmyroski:
Thank you for the fav-o ritz! :D

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Suzy: Before I found my pet clam I was lackluster, and morose.
Peggy: That's a coin purse!
:iconmyroski:
And the Watch :D

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Suzy: Before I found my pet clam I was lackluster, and morose.
Peggy: That's a coin purse!
:iconinflatedmuscle:
thanks for the recent favs, bud
:iconinflatedmuscle:
thanks for all the favs - wow!
:iconkicksnare917:
your work is absolutely AMAZING!!! you capture everything so vividly and think up some of the most creative scenarios! keep up the awesome work!
:iconinflatedmuscle:
Thank you for the support and note. I had a chat with a buddy over the weekend who writes this kind of stuff about worrying that our stuff sounds like the same thing over and over again. As he put it how many different ways can you say 'his belly is swelled up like a beachball"? I used to try to use"he's blowing up like a balloon", in every story as a tagline or a signature but these days I almost moan when it pops up on the screen. So your note couldn't have come at a better time. Thanks!
:iconkicksnare917:
I wouldn't worry about it too much. Sure you may see those words in a lot of stories, but often they're the best way to get the imagery across. Sure cliches kind of suck... but try to think of some other way to describe it. You could try looking at it from various perspectives too. I know it's easier said than done, but you can try to look outside of the box. Also, if you're looking for a new angle, try writing to a new audience for once. It may be difficult to do, but don't write for a specific audience (like us). It's always a good idea to stretch and work your writing capabilities.

I hope this helps.

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